It only came out a few weeks back and I had an advance order in with Amazon. I loved David Adams Richards earlier book “Mercy Among the Children” so much that it was going to be impossible to live up to that 5 star rating. And it was.
People always use terms like “moral” and “fierce” to describe this writer, but I’d forgotten how long winded and repetitive he could be. A couple of sections were terribly preachy; his own moral theories badly woven into the story. Worst of all, the main character Alex was portrayed as a small town ethics lecturer, but his thoughts and prejudices were akin to those of a person with half his IQ. In short, an unbelievable character in a sometimes unbelievable story. Other people and sequences worked a lot better; the incorrigible Leo Bourque, the uncommonly insightful native Canadian police inspector Markus Paul and the breathtaking scene near the end when a 15 year old girl is pursued by two men who wish to drown her.
Particularly in the second half, the book gathered momentum and was really compelling, but at half the size it would have been every bit as effective. It’s not that often I spend so much time wondering how clumsily chapters are put together, or why the same points are repeated again and again and the obvious re-stated. I have been spoiled by the sparse writing of Galgut and Coetzee for sure. 4 stars.